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Collaborative Poetry [3]

Journal Entry: Sat Jun 30, 2012, 12:58 PM
Here're a few old ones that were spawned in a collaborative poetry session between me and `zebrazebrazebra in #CRLiterature. I think we did this one around November last year.

I've left the timestamps and usernames in so you can get a feel for how fast we were going. One of our bests, I think. We wrote them between two and three minutes each.



10:56:29 PM <zebrazebrazebra> Who grows first when the corn is mowing?
10:58:17 PM <Vocable> Asparagus stalks rise and bend
10:58:38 PM <zebrazebrazebra> Their heads like girl's curled hair
11:01:02 PM <Vocable> And the lady's fingers hold
11:01:39 PM <zebrazebrazebra> the sun in a curve



11:02:33 PM <zebrazebrazebra> Dick shoot breeze sneeze
11:02:42 PM <Vocable> clitoris caverns echo the wind
11:02:58 PM <zebrazebrazebra> their pale pink geology
11:03:35 PM <Vocable> reverberate moaning
11:04:16 PM <zebrazebrazebra> and the groaning of prehistoria
11:05:05 PM <Vocable> hysterics. The hymen yields
11:05:41 PM <zebrazebrazebra> and those elysian fields are free--
11:06:45 PM <Vocable> breast water river flows
11:07:02 PM <zebrazebrazebra> and the screech of oceans ringing.
11:07:56 PM <Vocable> Nipple fire, the glowing areolae
11:09:00 PM <zebrazebrazebra> that stark star in a rounded cloud
11:09:57 PM <Vocable> ignites ancient passion and sparks
11:10:42 PM <zebrazebrazebra> and a fat tongue spread like spit on a wound
11:11:24 PM <Vocable> that cauterizes flesh.



11:13:40 PM <Vocable> Rampaging ancients, processor starts
11:13:53 PM <zebrazebrazebra> and the bleep blink of a virus, smarting
11:14:07 PM <Vocable> firewalls, protection programs. No condom enough
11:14:22 PM <zebrazebrazebra> no rubber to hold in that wad of flesh
11:14:48 PM <Vocable> invading. Hacking the system, entering
11:15:04 PM <zebrazebrazebra> perspiring as it goes, slick trails of code
11:15:13 PM <Vocable> zero one zero one one it goes.



11:22:51 PM <zebrazebrazebra> sunup, the underdone egg
11:23:01 PM <Vocable> slides onto the plate, greasy
11:23:12 PM <zebrazebrazebra> with the sweat of morning workers
11:23:44 PM <Vocable> and pools
11:24:08 PM <zebrazebrazebra> on the plate of the day.
11:24:23 PM <Vocable> sundown, the overcooked egg
11:24:39 PM <zebrazebrazebra> yolk hard and stale, birdsong gone
11:24:58 PM <Vocable> and crickets chirping, loud as evening
11:25:08 PM <zebrazebrazebra> pale as stone.

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`LiliWrites Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The results are in! Thanks for your participation in the One Sentence at a Time Project! :heart:

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~Vocable Jan 1, 2013   Writer
i need you
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will you marry me?
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~FourPawsSly Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aw, thanks for the +stalk, SpaceCommunist.
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~Vocable Dec 16, 2012   Writer
No problem, SpaceRobotZombie.
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(a belated) thanks for the :+fav:!
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~Falareste Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the watch, stranger. :hug:
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~Vocable Oct 7, 2012   Writer
Right back atcha, stranger. =]
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