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Uncertainty spreads itself on your shadow in the east,
I wanting even your adumbration in the light.

The air between us relaxes only when departing
to somewhere sighing as it insinuates all.

Indeed the depths between us fills mostly west
and even this we presumed dying.

My self and your gaining obscuration
contrary to resting, confused and at once decisive.

That which is north is bluebruise false
and I linger in the south, shaded and inscribed.
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One of the first things I've finished in a while. Inspired by a bunch of things.

Primarily Dan Schmidt's interactive fiction game "For a Change" and Nathan Masserang's "A wonderful moment (as they all are)."

"For A Change" was also partly inspired by "The Age of Wire and String" by Dan Marcus and "The Book of the New Sun" by Gene Wolfe, both of which are also interesting in their own right and are on my to-read-eventually list.

This might also recall some of E. E. Cummings' work.
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This is really intriguing, delightfully complex and infused poetry. I have to keep reading it to understand it, and that's nice. :coffeecup:
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